Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, August 26, 2019
weekend recount
26th August, 2019
Focus: To use a complex sentence - with a joining word - like because. To use full stops, commas and capital letters correctly - can you do it?
My Recount of the Weekend
Over the last two days I had a weekend and it was great i played with mitchell.
On Friday after school i did nothing just played.
On Saturday my cousin played Basketball and i won the first game and my cousin won the next game i was sad.
On Sunday i went shopping with my nana and grandpa. And went one a big walk. it was fun and I got new shoes. and I'm wearing it now.
My favourite food is tacos because they are good.
My favourite character in The Magic Faraway Tree is rick because he's cool
A sport or game I would love to play at school this week is dead ball.
A book I would love in Chapter Chat to do is dont no
One thing not many people know about me is im nice
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Have you checked your sentences for sense?
Have you checked your spelling?
Have you put in your full stops and capital letters in the correct spots?
Can you add in other punctuation like commas or speech marks or exclamation marks?
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