Friday, August 13, 2021
the dark triangle...
The bermuda triangle
*rain* sounds *thunder* sounds
Uhh, maday maday we are going down help.
1958/02/09
*uhh you are clear to take off flight 96*
27 minutes into the flight
There is a big lightning storm ahead of us, we are going to go under it. Ohh shoot one of the engines blew up, uhh now the other engine is gone, maday, maday ,maday, were going down…
H. e.l.p… *weird* sounds play on the radio. Meanwhile *screaming* sounds...
Uhh, here you are, are you ok, yeah, takes a big breath, where are we its so dark, wow, that is so beautiful*ringing* sounds and glowing lights around the room… the end
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Kase, this is an excellent piece of writing. I love how you have added 'voice overs' with people screaming and weird sounds being played on the radio. Great use of punctuation too. Keep up the great work.
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